spreadmywings
Writer
I've got to spread my wings I've gotta fly!
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Post by spreadmywings on Nov 8, 2005 19:05:50 GMT -5
The missed birthday wish Makes you wonder how people feel about you Your told how sorry they are But do they mean it? You try to hide your dissapointment But is sneaks through the mask We see sadness, dissapointment and loneliness I can't make promises for everyone else But I promise I'll try to give you that one missed Birthday Wish
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Post by Vanya on Nov 12, 2005 0:20:51 GMT -5
Awwww, it's so sad! I really like it. It's more like a story not just a picture of a feeling, so it has a different tone than most of yours. So sad. *you're not your *disappointment *it not is *I think... the last Birthday Wish shouldn't be capitalized. It gives it emphasis but it doesn't really fit. Loving this poem. ;D
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