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Dreams
Oct 26, 2005 15:46:22 GMT -5
Post by Vanya on Oct 26, 2005 15:46:22 GMT -5
my twin dreams birthed almost as one that no one else knows I think I almost don't know that they exist anymore.
first of all I want to write extravagantly like the best poets I've read emotional responses spinning enthralling webs like that, like that, there but I guess I'll wait a while because my style changes so frequently that I barely know what I'll write before it slides mischievously from my fingers
secondly the twin to that is this: to sing I can sing, yes and to my surprise I am allowed to sing another solo after royally botching my first but my dream is this: to sing so sweetly emotionally powerfully beyond words you know wrapping notes around the gazing crowd not renowned for lyrics or the tune but the ability to make the melody meaningful somehow
God only knows if I'll ever accomplish these twin dreams but maybe in time they'll show up when I least expect
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barf
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Dreams
Oct 27, 2005 19:29:52 GMT -5
Post by barf on Oct 27, 2005 19:29:52 GMT -5
ROYALLY BOTCHING, i love it. it adds a bit of (i want to say sarcasm but that's not it ) something. by the way, your style is pretty well developed, i think. you do really awesomely in the style you've just written in. however, your style is evident in whatever you write even if you change the way you write it.
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